Demon
Apocalypse is set
directly after
the events of
Book 5. Grubbs
Grady is trapped
on a plane with
demons and seems
doomed to die.
Salvation comes
from an
unexpected
quarter, but
soon Grubbs
wonders if he
might have been
better off
perishing on the
plane!
Grubbs becomes a
reluctant
assistant to an
ancient magician
and sets out on
a life fighting
demons. He finds
himself unsuited
to the job, but
when the lives
of those he
loves most are
put at risk, he
must try to face
his fears and
come to terms
with his magical
powers.
But the world is
poised on the
brink of an
apocalypse. All
seems doomed.
The Demonata are
on the verge of
winning the
centuries-old
war with
mankind. If
Grubbs is to
save his loved
ones, he'll also
have to save the
world. And
that's a big ask
for a teenager
who hates magic
and is still
worried that he
might turn into
a werewolf!!!
NOTES
NB: these
notes contain
Plot Spoilers!!!
You should not
read the notes
unless you have
read the book
...
Demon
Apocalypse
was the
fourth
Demonata
book that I
wrote, after
Lord Loss, Bec
and Blood
Beast.
I wrote the
first draft in
March 2004 (over
3 years before
it was
published). I
originally
intended
Blood Beast
and Demon
Apocalypse
to be one book,
and plotted them
that way, but I
quickly realised
that would be a
very big book,
and since the
story had a
natural
cliffhanger
halfway through,
I decided to
split it in two.
The book's
working title
was Demonater
(a play on one
of my favourite
films, The
Terminator).
I liked the
title, as it
gave the
impression that
the main
character -
Grubbs - was a
demon-destroying
machine. But
ultimately I
didn't like it
enough to stick
with it, and
came up with the
final title
further down the
line.
This was the
first book in
which I wrote
about Beranabus
and Kernel
Fleck. I knew
that Beranabus
was going to be
Bran from Bec
-- but only
if I decided to
publish Bec.
At the time I
didn't have a
series planned
out and I wasn't
sure if Bec
would fit in
with the three
books I'd
written about
Grubbs Brady. I
thought about
maybe releasing
the three Grubbs
books, one after
another, and
then perhaps
releasing Bec
as a standalone
prequel later. I
was also
considering the
possibility of
creating another
standlone
prequel, about
Beranabus, and I
did think about
weaving the two
of those books
in with the
Grubbs books,
but I wasn't
convinced I
could make it
work.
I didn't know
much about
Kernel at this
stage. Although
he was powerful,
he didn't have
the special
power that I
would come to
give him later,
of being able to
see panels of
light and form
them into
windows. At this
time he was just
another
Disciple, like
any other. I
actually planned
to kill him off
when I was
writing my notes
-- but later,
when I was
writing the
book, I decided
to keep him
alive, although
I wasn't
entirely sure
why ...
I wrote the
following scene
in which Kernel
tells Grubbs a
bit about his
early life:
“I was eleven
when Beranabus
found me. I’d
been driven out
of my home and
village. I’d
always been
different, able
to work magic
since I was a
very young
child. But in
recent months it
had gotten out
of hand. I’d
frightened
people.
Accidentally set
fire to the roof
of my home.
Destroyed a
cow.”
“What?” I blink.
“I was trying to
make it float,”
he says
sheepishly. “It
was a dare. I
lost control.
The cow
exploded.”
I burst out
laughing.
“Sorry,” I gasp.
“I can’t help
it.”
“I know,” he
says, smiling
humourlessly.
“Sounds like
fun, making a
cow blow up. But
I came from a
poor,
agricultural
village. Cows
were valuable. A
cow meant
wealth, food,
milk, security,
life. Killing
one was no small
thing. It wasn’t
the final straw
– that came when
the crop failed,
which actually
had nothing to
do with me – but
it was one of
the last. They
thought I was
evil. I guess I
thought it too.
They drove me
out. I was
subexisting on
the fringes of
the village,
always near
starving, no
friends, no
family. Then
Beranabus came
along.”
Kernel looks
over at the
magician again,
but with
fondness this
time. “He saved
me. Took me
away. Told me
the truth about
myself. Taught
me how to master
my powers and
use them for
good. The
downside to that
was — I had to
fight demons.
There was no
either/or. He
put it to me
plain. He’d turn
my life around,
lift me out of
the gutters in
which I’d been
living, but in
return I’d have
to do as he said
and help him
slay the
Demonata.”
“But he can’t
force you,
surely,” I
protest.
“No,” Kernel
sighs. “But he
doesn’t have to.
He’s the only
family I have.
The only true
friend. He took
me into the
other universe
within days of
bringing me
here. That’s how
he works with
students now —
he throws them
straight in at
at the deep end.
It was different
when he had a
whole class. He
worked in this
world then,
teaching them,
bringing them
along gradually.
Not any more.
Now, if he
reckons somebody
has the power,
he tosses them
at the demons,
stands back and
leaves them to
it. If they
survive, he has
a student and
partner. If they
fail …” Kernel
shrugs.
“Beranabus has
to be ruthless
when the
occasion calls
for it. He
doesn’t like it,
but that’s life.
If you want to
fight monsters,
you have to be
monstrous
sometimes.”
I changed
virtually all of
that when I came
to write
Demon Thief,
and went back in
later drafts and
re-wrote the
Kernel scenes in
this book, but
that's how he
started life.
That often
happens in books
-- you need a
starting point
in your mind for
a character, but
they'll later
develop in a
completely
different way
than you first
imagined. I
never worry too
much about my
characters when
I'm plotting a
book -- I always
trust that
they'll lead me
in directions of
their own, and
so far
(thankfully!)
they have.
The Kah-Gash is
another example
of how a book
can change in
subsequent
drafts. There
was no mention
of an ancient
demon weapon in
the first draft.
Grubbs and Bec
simply tapped
into the power
of the Demonata
and used that to
work their
magical spells.
At the time I
knew that wasn't
satisfactory,
that there had
to be a better
explanation for
how they
achieved what
they did (and
how Bec chated
death), but
since I couldn't
think of
anything better,
I just went
along with what
I had to hand.
The important
thing with a
first draft is
to finish it.
Sometimes you
have to gloss
over problems
and errors. I
never worry
about that -- I
know I can
return to the
story several
times and fix
the weaknesses
then. With a
first draft i
just want to get
the whole thing
down on paper,
so that I have a
rough idea of
what it will
look like when
fully assembled.
I address loop
holes and
logical mires on
later drafts. I
think it's a
good way of
working -- by
forcing yourself
to write, you
force yourself
to confront and
deal with these
problems.
Otherwise I
might still be
sitting in my
office, all
these years
later, still
playing around
with the story
ideas inside my
head!!! You can
never work
everything
out in advance
-- sometimes you
have to make a
leap of faith
and trust
yourself to come
up with answers
later.
I also didn't
know what the
shadowy creature
glimpsed in the
cave was. I
didn't think it
was that
important at the
time --
Beranabus did
mention it at
the end of the
book and said he
was going to try
and track it
down, but I
didn't know if
I'd ever write a
sequel to
Demon Apocalypse,
so it wasn't a
big issue.
This was the key
book to what
became the
structure of the
final series.
First, it made
me want to go
back and do
another Grubbs
book, set
between Lord
Loss and
Blood Beast.
Because Grubbs
wasn't
especially
powerful in the
first book, and
because he
became SO
powerful in this
one, I felt
there needed to
be an in-between
book, charting
his rise, to
make it seem
more gradual and
realistic. As I
was wondering
how I could do
that, I recalled
the idea I'd had
to write a book
based around a
movie set, and
the germs for
Slawter were
born. While I
was planning
that, and after
I wrote it, I
kept coming back
to the problem
of the
time-travel and
how Grubbs and
Bec came by
their powers. I
realised I
needed another
book - and
another main
character - to
set up the
situation and
draw together
the various plot
threads of the
Grubbs Grady
books and Bec
-- Bec's story
didn't fit in
with the other
books as it
stood; something
was missing, and
eventually I
figured out that
"something" was
Demon Thief,
which led me to
go back and
re-think the
character of
Kernel Fleck. I
decided that he
would become the
third main
character
(having toyed
with the idea of
introducing
someone as yet
unmentioned in
any of the
books), and
since he lost
his eyes in
Demon Apocalypse,
I figured his
special gift
should have
something to do
with his sense
of sight, as
that would make
it more of an
issue when his
eyes were poked
out ...
I had to
re-write quite a
lot of this
book, as the
characters of
Kernel and Juni
evolved. In the
first draft Juni
met Dervish for
the first time,
so I have to
develop their
romance very
swiftly -- when
I saw an
opportunity to
include her in
Demon Town
(which became
Slawter),
that allowed me
to give their
relationship
more time and
space.
Knotting things
together is one
of the hardest
parts of being a
writer. Linking
a character or
event in a scene
in one book with
a scene in
another can be
VERY tricky.
It's at the
heart of what
makes a good
series, so it's
vital to do it
well, but you
can't always
know what's
coming in later
books, so if you
write the series
one book at a
time, you're
limited in
certain ways. By
juggling several
books around
over a 2 or 3
year period, I
give myself the
opportunity to
include more
"knots". It's a
chaotic way to
write, and scary
because there
are times when
you're not in
control of what
you're working
on -- but, hell,
it's FUN!!!! And
when it works,
it allows you to
create something
much more
multi-layered
and
interconnected
than you
originally
imagined.
Some readers
have noted that
Demon
Apocalypse
reads like the
last book a
series. It was
certainly
written that way
-- while I
thought it might
be possible to
write a sequel
or two, I didn't
plan to do any
more books about
demons after
this one (except
for the prequel
or two), so I
threw in
everything I
could, kitchen
sink and all!!!
I wanted to
write a
breakneck,
thrilling,
rollercoaster
ride of a book,
one that would
let me go out in
high style.
When, much
later, I
realised I
wanted to
continue the
story on past
this point, I
faced a HUGE
challenge -- how
to top a book
that, by its
very title,
seemed almost
untoppable?!?
The answer lay
in that shadowy
beast I included
as a whim, and
although it took
me a long time
to figure it
out, when I did,
I saw that there
was a LOT more I
need to say, and
even stranger
places I had to
go.
Most book series
would end on an
apocalypse. But
in The
Demonata the
apocalypse isn't
the end. In
fact, in many
ways, it's the
real beginning
of the MAIN
storyline ...